Final Evaluation

For this FMP, we got to write our proposal and choose what our project was based on. I had a few initial ideas but ran with my favourite which was to rebrand a made up drinks company which quickly changed to become a live client called ‘Cornish Country Cordials’. The rebrand originally was going to include new label designs, uniforms, business cards, website and a short film, which I quickly noticed was going to be too much to do so cut some things out – I did this to ensure I had an outcome that I was pleased with.

The experience of rebranding a company has been interesting due to having no prior experience with branding. I enjoyed have the contact with the client and discussing what we could do to move the project further, although getting my logos critiqued was interesting as she didn’t choose the logo I thought was best but obviously, I had to go with what the client wanted. This was a good experience overall as this is what it would be like when working for a real client. I do wish I had come to the decision of rebranding CCC a week or two earlier, as I feel I left the decision to late and could have done more work in the time I wasted.

My original idea was to rebrand the company in a Cornish style so I looked at existing Cornish brands, although it was suggested that I try something more challenging, rather than going with a style that is used a lot. The whole idea for my designs came from a rebrand I was told to look at called Appy Fizz, which was based on the feelings you get on your tongue when you drink them. I decided to take this idea and base my whole designs on the flavours of the cordials Cornish Country Cordials create. As I am passionate about local fruit drinks and branding I found this project incredibly fun to do which I feel has shown through in the amount of research and experiments I have created.

In this project, I have had to learn many new skills such as using watercolours, screen printing and lino printing and have improved existing skills in Adobe InDesign and Illustrator. As a lot of my previous work is digital, I wanted to try using more traditional practices as I am very good at digital art but don’t want traditional practices to not be in my skill set. For my label designs, I ended up using my digital skills to create watercolour looking images as I wasn’t able to get the desired effect I wanted with watercolours – I believe this was due to my lack of paint mixing skills. I was annoyed that I couldn’t get the watercolour designs I anticipated I would, as I feel the none digitalised versions would have been less saturated and had a more elegant look which was what I depicted at the start.

In the last project, I still didn’t feel I experimented and developed my work enough, so this time I went all out. Instead of just keeping with a couple versions of a logo, I created a whole page full of different ideas, some that would work and others that wouldn’t. Before, when I had found a design I liked I had just run with that, although this time I found that I liked the next version more than the last which kept going until I found the perfect version. A huge problem that I ran into from this was that I got too carried away experimenting, researching and creating, that the end came up too quickly which caused me to have to rush. In future projects, I will need to get into a habit of stopping at the end of every week, evaluating my what I’ve done and what I still need to do more effectively as I didn’t do this as well as I should have in this project.

In terms of other people’s views of my work, I believe the majority of people will be more likely to look at the cordials as the packaging will stand out a mile when next to other drinks bottles. My aim to give people an insight into the taste of the cordials has worked but not in the way I originally thought. I would’ve liked labels to have come out more alike the Niche Tea packaging with a more visual story rather than just colour textures – which is what I ended up with. The client really like the final outcomes and loved the whole visual flavour design idea, that I had at the start, but felt the same as me that the designs should have had more of a visual story.

In conclusion, the experience of rebranding a live client has made me realise this is what I would like to do in the future. I am really happy with the final outcome, although if I was to do it again, I would definitely have spent more time creating a visual story on the labels rather than having to end up using a photograph and digitally manipulating it. I do feel that I should have asked the client be more forward in the decision making as I feel she was thinking about what was best for me, rather than her company.


Business Cards – Development and final piece.

 To go along with the new labels and apron, I decided to create some business cards as well. Business cards were a good idea to create as they could possibly get some more business for the client when displayed at the summer show as potential clients take them away and contact the supplier at a later date.

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I wanted to design business cards that look elegant by having a minimal amount of clutter on. I wanted the logo on one side and a brief description of the company and website address on the back. I did have a look at having the business cards vertical rather than horizontal but I feel it looks silly as you don’t see many vertical business cards, so I went with the simple and traditional layout.Screen Shot 2017-06-16 at 14.57.56

My initial idea was to have the business cards very similar to labels, but as I had so many different label background designs, I wasn’t sure which to choose. I don’t know if many companies do this, but my idea was to have five different business cards all with different backgrounds, that would be shuffled together. I thought this idea was strange although I have seen illustrators and other artists business cards in this way.  I liked the idea but I felt the business cards didn’t look as good as the labels in the same style as they look odd and needed to be simpler. The one good thing about those designs was that they stood out a mile.Screen Shot 2017-06-16 at 14.50.14

A peer suggested that I put the texture inside the logo and text instead of a fill. I did this by using the create outlines tool in Illustrator for the text and a using the object – pattern tool to create the texture and then adding the texture as a fill to the logo and text. I much prefer these designs as they still contain the textures that have backed the whole brand but in a simple form.

As with the labels, I didn’t know if I was going to have any problems printing the cards, luckily everything went fine. I had thought of printing out each side of the business cards separately and then sticking them onto cereal box card but that isn’t very professional and I want my display at the final show to look good.


I came up with the idea of arranging the business cards, as seen in the image above, with the fronts aligned to the left and the backs aligned to the right. All I had to do then was print the design on both sides of a piece of white card and I would have business cards.


As you can see it worked well, except for the fact that the printer printed it slightly out of line, so you can see a tiny bit of the black line around the edges.


Overall, I am very happy with the business cards as they look professional and have the watercolour design element I wanted the whole brand identity to have. To be honest, I like the way it’s turned out so much I wonder if I should have tried this kind of style for the labels as these look professional and have the elegant factor I wanted.

Packaging – Producing The Product Labels.

Sally, the owner of Cornish Country Cordials, prints all her labels herself and wanted the new labels I create, to also be able to be printed by her. The labels she uses are 105mm by 70.7mm, which means you can fit 8 on an A4 page with a small bit of wasted paper at the top and bottom (as seen below).


My initial idea is to have the label layout rather similar to the original with just the overall design being changed. At the moment I am slightly unsure about the overall composition of the labels but once I have all the elements ready, I am sure the composition will come together nicely.


 My initial idea for the new labels was to create individual abstract watercolour designs for each flavour that would feature colours you associate with the fruits inside.

Before I actually created the watercolour experiments, I got a really nice watercolour image of Google that was free to use commercially and created a mockup of what I was planning on doing to show to Sally. She really liked the idea and how it looked but I personally loved how it looked and wanted to make my designs almost identical to the one I found. Obviously, some of the text isn’t very readable, although as it was just a first idea I left it the way it was.

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As the website only had this design and didn’t have others versions with other colours, I had a go at changing the colours myself in Adobe Photoshop. I didn’t plan to use these but decided to do them to learn something new in Photoshop.

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Blood Orange.

Whole lemon

Whole Lemon.

Very Berry

Very Berry.

I liked the designs above, only I really wanted to create the watercolour designs myself but found it really hard getting the style I wanted to work. The method I was using to create these designs was firstly laying down a decent amount of water evenly over the paper and then dabbing wet pigment over the water, which resulted in these nice designs as seen below – this technique is like wet in wet.


The design below was scanned in at 600ppi rather than the 300ppi of the scan above. I did this as the quality is better and obviously I want the labels to look as good as they can.Scan 1

The reason why these designs above (for the orange & chilli cordial) looked good, was that I was able to use original colours in my watercolour set, rather than having to mix them myself. With having to mix the exact colour I wanted myself, this meant that they weren’t very bright, which resulted in weird looking watercolours that I didn’t like. (as seen in the image below)

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This problem I was facing was getting me rather annoyed as I wasn’t getting the result I imagined I would for the other flavours. So I decided to try and just use the design for the orange and chilli cordial that I liked and digitally change it like I did with the image that I got of the internet.

In the images below, you can see that I have digitally changed the colour which is what I did with the image I got of Google. I imagined that the designs would look rather natural, which is what you would get from creating them in real life rather than on a screen.

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Orange Experiment.

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Very Berry

I really wanted to have the whole watercolour designs created by me but unfortunately, I couldn’t get the same results from digitally changing my own scan as the results of digitally changing the free image I got of Google. As you can see in the image above, you can bearly even tell that it’s supposed to be watercolours! I am really disappointed that am not able to get the desired colours for each flavour as I wanted to have the whole design made entirely by myself.

I used these adjustment tools to change the colours of my original watercolour image to colours that are associated with the other fruit drinks. I am not 100% sure how to correctly use these tools but I experimented until I got the result that I wanted.

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As I wasn’t able to get the desired colours myself, I decided to ask a lecturer as he obviously knows more than I do and might have known another way or a workaround. Unfortunately, the only way he knew, was the way I had already been doing so he just had a go at that but like me couldn’t get the exact colours I wanted.

Due to this, he said maybe I should just use the versions I created using the image I got of Google. At first, I didn’t like that idea because I wanted the whole design to be my own, but after some thought I decided to go ahead with this idea and use the Google image version.


Although I liked the designs, they were too over saturated and I wanted my designs to me rather muted, healthy and natural tones whereas over saturated colours look unhealthy.


These versions are less saturated and I look a lot more natural which is what I wanted the designs to look like. One other thing I have changed in these versions are that I’ve used the spot healing brush and patch tool in Photoshop to make the designs for each label look slightly different. A problem that I was facing was the text on the labels not being very reading on light areas of the watercolour, I managed to solve this by using the patch tool to drag a darker area over the light area solving the problem.


After some more tinkering, I finally came to these designs which I like and feel are completely finished. The most noticeable change between the previous designs and these is the watercolour for the Whole Lemon Cordial. It was pointed out to me that the design looked like it was for a lemon and lime cordial – which it isn’t, so I changed the colour using the colour balance tool and experimented until I got this result which I like.


Now that I had the watercolours it was time to experiment with layout.

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I wanted to keep the layout of the labels very similar to the labels she already uses, as they are simple and display everything in a clear and functional way. The two sketches above show the initial layout idea.

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This was my first idea for the layout of my labels which has the logo at the forefront, flavour a bit smaller underneath and then extra information neatly placed around the sides. The one major problem with this design was that the same font was being used too much, which resulted in the design looking very cluttered.

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When talking to lecturers about my problem and asking their opinion on my labels already, it was suggested that I try using two different fonts in my designs – one Serif and one San Serif. It was also mentioned that I should see what the labels would look like if I decreased the size of the company logo on the front.

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Unfortunately, when I went to Sally house to pick up the labels, she only had different ones left as you had been preparing for The Royal Cornwall Show that week. As the labels were a different size, I needed to go back and recreate the labels and to the new size of 99.1mm by 67.7 which was fairly easy but annoying.

Final Labels.


Overall I am rather pleased with the final designs. As I said already, I would have liked to of been able to have the watercolours made by myself but seeing how the labels look now, I am glad that I didn’t use the edited versions of my own watercolours. The only thing looking at all the designs digitally now that I’m still not 100% happy with is the saturation of the backgrounds. If feel this way as I still think it’s a bit too much but if it was any lower you wouldn’t be able to see the white text so I will have to leave it like this.

Logo Design – Designing And Developing The New Logo.

One of the items inside the new branding packaging for Cornish Country Cordials I am creating is a logo. I am wanting to create a logomark and/or a logotype that connotes the country, healthy wellbeing and possibly the middle-class market.

Here are my initial ideas for possible logos.


I really like all three of the bigger designs on this page of ideas. My favourite is the tree with leaves made from the three c shapes. Through the whole design, I want to convey CCC’s ethos of using locally and naturally grown fruit and veg and how the cordials are healthier than those that have added flavourings and preservatives. I will do this by incorporating an aspect of nature in the logo.


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When I showed these initial logo design ideas to Sally the owner of Cornish Country Cordials, she said her favourite design was the top-left one. She said she really liked the idea of having the three c’s arranged to look like foliage. At first, she liked the version with the solid rectangle background but I advised her that the block behind the logo wouldn’t look good on the labels with the watercolour idea we had, I also mentioned that the ridged shape doesn’t work with our handmade ethos as it might look to industrial.

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I am a fan of this design as it has everything I want below to feel when the see the cordials – that they’re good enough for animals to drink. Although it still needs tweaking I like the idea behind it.

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With this logo, I like the hand written type as it gives the sense that everything is handmade and good for you. I would like to rework the hand drawn part as the weight isn’t the same all the way through.

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This third logo I like, as it had a hidden meaning. The 3 arcs that make up the leaves are supposed to be the 3 c’s for Cornish Country Cordials.  The only problem that I have with this logo, is that when I should it to my lecturer he said the logo looked like Adolf Hitler’s nose and moustache and obviously we don’t want customers thinking the same thing when seeing the logo.

More logo sketching.


Here are some more ideas I had one afternoon, some keeping with the natural theme but others like the champagne glass that go for the more middle to upper-class feel.

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I was originally using the serif font Minion Pro but had a look to see what a san serif font like Futura Light would look like. After looking at them both for a while, my lecturer and I came to the conclusion that the San Serif font Futura Light worked better, as the contrast between the thick hand lettering and the Futura Light felt more natural.

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As I wasn’t 100% set on the first hand-lettering draft I did, I decided to try again and see if I could do it better. The top attempt was created in my own hand written style whereas the bottom version was created in the way most people do hand lettering with a brush pen. The brush pen way should have a heavier weight on the downstroke than the upstroke. To help me vectorize the images in Illustrator, I watched a few Youtube videos to get tips. One of the main tips I got, to make the vector version look more professional, was to use the anchor points in a horizontal, vertical, horizontal, vertical pattern and this way you get nice curves.

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The top logo was the original handwritten logo, with the following two being the second draft versions of which the top one is the one in the correct handwritten style, although I do prefer the second of the two. I had the idea of having a bird sat on top of the C and liked how it looked when I draw it out on paper but wasn’t a fan of how it looked digitally.  I really like the bottom design of the four with the leaf growing out of the C of Country as it has everything I want from the logo – to show the nature and handmade sides of Cornish Country Cordials. If I was to use this as the finished logo, I would use the new hand lettering as the example above is using the first draft of my hand lettering.

20170511_150117 (1)The idea of the logo being a bird drinking out of a wine/champagne glass was one I really liked as it shows that Sally’s cordials are almost good enough for animals to drink.

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If I was to use this as the final logo, I would like to rework the tail feathers, as I am not sure whether to have them pointy or flat. As the image needed to be recognisable in black and white, I tried just using one single colour as seen below and it worked nicely.

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After looking at the design with just a solid colour, I noticed that it actually looks more sophisticated, which is somewhat what I want the logo to connote.

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After looking at the design again, I noticed that I didn’t like the bottom of the wine glass, as it was just to round. So I flattened the bottom of and now I like the design a whole lot more.

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I draw an initial logo design with a bunch of others, that featured two champagne glass ‘tinging’. I came up with the design when thinking about how women aged 20-40 will be drinking the cordials. When speaking to Sally, she said that women often buy the drinks to mix with Prosecco and other alcoholic beverages and when drinking them, they would most probably be with friends having fun. I think all three of the logos work well as they feature the semiotic of having a good time. Overall, I like the design but I don’t think it’s the strongest idea I have.

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This logo design I created in a spare moment and it incorporates the idea that nature is inside the cordial you buy. I personally have mixed feelings about the design, as it works in some ways; such as the idea that nature is inside the cordial, although myself and other people have thought people might not get the idea and think that the cordials have flower water inside.

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The top logo was the client’s favourite and also one of the logos which I really liked even though my lecturer told me he thought it looked like Adolf Hilter’s moustache and nose. To get around this, I decided to see what it might look like with a single C shape of foliage but I wasn’t too happy with the outcomes, so I kept with the initial design.

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I still wasn’t happy that people might think it was Hitler’s moustache and nose, so I sat down with my lecturer and we decided to move the c shape arc’s closer together and move them down the trunk a bit and I feel it looks a whole lot better.

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It when suggested to me that I experimented with using more than just the three c shape arcs. At first, I wasn’t too sure about the idea but gave it ago anyway. The first design I liked at first but somehow went off it so changed the orientation of two of the arcs which made me like the logo a lot more.

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I was advised to go even further and change the size and orientation of some of the arcs. A few of these I like but still personally feel having just the three arcs as the whole bassist of the ideas as the three together symbolised the three c’s of Cornish Country Cordials – but at the end of the day, it’s all up to the client!

I will now send all the versions of the three arc tree logo to the client so she can choose the final version or give final ways to change one.

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These are my personal favourite designs as I feel they all fit the target audience of women aged 20-40, have connotations of nature and goodness and would be liked by people from middle to upper-class backgrounds.

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Here are some of the finished designs displayed on aprons, which is one of the places they will be seen, so I need to make sure they work.

Clients Final Decision.

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I emailed the client Sally, with a bunch of subversions of the logo she liked. Her reply was…

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The font she was talking about was Futura which I featured of some other logos I sent her. So I changed the font and sent it back to her again.

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This time her reply was…

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followed shortly by…

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I had wondered this question throughout the whole logo design process, so made sure that there was nothing too small on any design. To give her another option, I changed the Futura weight from Light to Book.

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I am very happy with the final logo as it has the upper class feel I wanted, it incorporates the nature aspect I wanted. The logo overall looks stylish and I also believe it fits the target market of women aged 20-40 as it’s elegant and has a powerful and modern look. The logo is also very recognisable which is what logo has to be to be a good logo.

Final Evaluation


For this project, I have a created some work that I am very pleased with. I am a person that strongly believes in equality and looking after the world, so at the start, I had lots of ideas floating around my head of pathways I could choose. My initial routes were racism, general waste/recycling and global warming – these are all things I feel passionately about. I chose to take the global warming route because I feel it is the problem that will get out of control quickly. I didn’t realise until I started researching that it could be easy to slow down the rate at with the earth is warming, everyone just needs to do small bits and that would be enough. Although there are other people that need to look at other options because they’re hugely contributing to global warming.


One thing in this project that I didn’t anticipate was the amount of time that I had to spend on my PPD as stuff got lost, I messed up a few things and the stress of all this got to me and did help my workflow. I was hoping to put everything into this project and come out with a tonne of research, developments, experiments and final outcomes. I have still got these things but I was hoping to concentrate completely on the project. For the final major project, I shouldn’t have anything going on with university as my interviews will be out the way and I will be awaiting results. As for this I will be able to concentrate on the project with all my time for 4 months – which should result in a good grade.


In this project, I attempted a few things differently. As I have started to develop my ideas more and instead of settling on the first design I have looked at created new version with different composition and design tweaks. The past 12 weeks has been the first where I have had 2 projects running along at the same time. The past two weeks have been a sharp learning curve as I realised I left my portfolio to the last minutes and had this project to do so I was very stressed with the work load. This has taught me that I need to use a time plan more effectively as the time plan I put together at the start of the project I didn’t stick – this was due to other things going on that I didn’t take into account.


In this project, I haven’t learnt many new skills or techniques but I have improved in terms of workflow in Adobe Illustrator. I have also proved to myself that I am not as bad at drawing as I thought and I can create decent designs and show ideas through thumbnails. In this project, I have been aiming to get better at my design process. Now in terms of equipment I am carrying around a small field notes sketchbook so I can record ideas for logos or designs whenever they strike. I have been told lots of times that pencil a paper is best medium for getting down ideas but sometimes I just jump straight into the computer and start creating.


Throughout the project I have been asking lecturers and peers to look at my designs. The feedback I got most of the time was great. The people I asked to see my message through the designs immediately which showed that they worked. Something that’s been annoying and great at the same time is how differently people view my work. One person might say to develop one way and another people another way. This helped me create a load of different possible outcomes for the ‘DO YOUR BIT!’ poster.


In my next project, I will aim to manage my time more effectively and try to stick to a time plan so I don’t end up with having lots of work to do in the last few weeks. I still want to improve my development skills as I feel I don’t develop my TIME IS RUNNING OUT! Posters enough I just left them like they were because I wasn’t that keep on the concept. To do this I will seek help and points on how I can develop them further.